english please
It was quite good but I did NOT understand everything because you have put it in German I understand it a bit (I have to learn it at school) so I could understand most of the things but it might be a good idea to put it in english as the language on this site is english too. So I wont be suprised if it gets blammed although it is good a bit to long so good job but just put it in english or post it on a german site.
thank you. as said before, i will try to get subtitles done asap. (most of it are bible quotes in any case.)
Blimey!
This was a really, really, long flash - you must have worked a long time on it, well done. There were some nice artistic touches to this, such as the cut from one person to another as/via the nails and the dove in the man's glasses. The animation was alright...but then this was really long (my screensaver came on twice lol) so it would have been hard to make it meticulous.
The music was well added as well, although the sound effects were rather clumsily done. Coming back to the music, some of it may be unsuited to the flash just because of its associations - i.e. the X-Files tune (although this may only be me) seemed a bit out of place here - only because it made me think of the X-Files.
The only issues I have with this is the lack of speech and the lack of subtitles. This would have been so much better had there been voice actors and although I know German, as does the previous reviewer, many will probably not, so subtitles would really have helped with the score. If you need translations in your future works, then i will gladly do it/them.
Other than that, gut gemacht
First of all, thank you :)
It did take a really long time I don't even know exactly how long. Takes about 2o - 25 minutes I've never really stopped the time.
Now, good thing you're mentioning voice actors. As I said in reply to another review below, this video is unwanted (naturally) by those who feel unmasked by it... those who have already taken action to get it deleted and were successful before. If we had used our voices in the video, they would immediately have known who we are, even if we used programs to change the voice, it can always be undone.
And you're right about the sound effects, they were just taken from findsounds.com and put in. There are several things that could be improved. They could actually move their lips and have animated faces, e.g. BUT that would take even longer =/ plus the message was more important to us than the animation.
And I will try to get it subtitled :)
Thanks again, Jer U Salem
english subtitles would really help
Someone who can't read German might pick up on the basic gist of this flash, but it would help if there were English subtitles.
(Und, ja, ich lese die deutsche Sprache).
Yes you are right; Problem is, that it took a very long time to get it done already and it already had it own website (with its own domain), which was hacked and deleted within 2 weeks by people who obviously didn't want the content to be shown to everyone. I hope that newgrounds won't be that easy to hack. It will take a while to get it subtitled but I will try whenever I have time in between.
powerful
what's the name of the song when the dove flies.
This was long and very powerful.
The song is called "Adiemus" by Karl Jenkins from the album of the same title.
And thanks. :)