wierd
Was alright, but... i honestly dunno what the hell was going on it all seemed a big mess really :s
wierd
Was alright, but... i honestly dunno what the hell was going on it all seemed a big mess really :s
I'll admit that some scenes really had no clear transition >_>
Do you have any suggestions as to what I could have done to make it better?
wheres the storyline?
this is one of the few fight flashes w/o a storyline that dissappointed me...
next animation like this plz add some sort of a storyline...
yes you're right it does get better as it goes on but still....
add something of a background or storyline in the next animation like this plz
The thing is, I really wouldn't know how to go about adding a storyline.
Short of adding text and converting it into more of a four-minute trailer than an animation.
Could you give me an example of a fight flash done right without a storyline?
Thanks for the review :)
A rather big disapointment to flash in my eyes....
the main thing that stood out was the ppoor graphics and animation, it looks as if you made it in a day, after that it started to get so out of control with the moon monster, i had to switch it off it was that bad, next time, spend a little more time on it...
Ouch, that comment really stings >_>
I think it unfair to review something if you haven't seen it all, but then again, I can't really blame you if this isn't your cup of tea.
I'm all for critique, but I really would like some suggestions as how to improve it.
Thanks for the review.
classic
Unforgettable and praiseworthy.