Awesome!!!
Awesome fight scene man. You coulda done better by adding voice overs and better graphics but for a first flash all my fiven are belong to this.
Reviews for "7: Genesis"
Ultimate7777 responds:
Eh, voice overs aren't my thing. I don't have the equipment to make them sound professional or even not-crap. I will consider them for some other animation, though!
Graphics? I can't blame you :)
Thanks alot, Avatar99 :)
Great work. Definately worth watching
I wasnt expecting much at first, but it was great. The graphics were less than fantastic, but it was still awesome to watch. Keep up the good work.
Ultimate7777 responds:
Yeah...haha...I was hoping that would be the case with the graphics. Thank you :)
Wow, 2 words, Fucking awesome
Great job on the animating! It really blew my mind!
Ultimate7777 responds:
Thank you very much for the compliments!
An unexpected treat!
I'm always wary when I see a submission still under review that has a large file size. It's usually some <10 frame garbage with a song. Not so here! The file size is large not only because of the relatively high quality audio but because there is some substantial animation here. Very, very good quality work Max. Keep it up. If you want a critical review I'd say the art might be a tad rough, likely only because of the quantity of frames. I understand that a production like this takes a huge amount of time and to perfect each frame just might not be a realistic option for you right now. However, I think if your lines were just a bit cleaner this would be frontpage material. The ANIMATION was very, very nice.
Ultimate7777 responds:
Wow, thank you very much for your extensive review! Critique is definitely what I need.
The song was my only sound, so I didn't want it to be bad quality. I do agree that I could've cleaned it up a bit (ashamedly, I'll admit I hardly use the eraser tool), but just the same, it's the laziness that gets in the way.
I did consider cleaning it up a bit before submission (for example, redoing the first half), and now, under your suggestion, I'm considering it even more. But... :\
Thank you again so much for review, and have a wonderful day.
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Pretty good all together, although a few suggestions would be to try and do some touch ups on the graphics and maybe throw in a plot line.
For some reason I really didn't think the music went with the video, maybe try something by the "5,6,7,8's", I think it would probably end up working alot better.
Good job though.
Ultimate7777 responds:
Yeah, I probably should've drawn a bit better, huh? :)
Although I don't really understand about a plot line. It would be very appreciated if you could explain that to me.
The music, well... I really liked this song, even though I'm rather annoyed by it after hearing it over and over while working on this animation ;) I was going for a very... well, "fairy" vibe, that you hear in the intro to the song.
Still, I will consider song suitability in the next installment.
Thanks for watching :)