Flow is pretty nice
The flow of th e 2nd verse reminds me of the House of Pain track Jump Around. My only gripe with it is that you sound like you are running out of breath at times. But all together good songs lyrics have that old skool vibe to it I rock with it.
You have a good ear, as I was trying to make a song with a similar flow to Jump Around by House Of Pain to see if I could pull it off. Yes, I did run out of breath a few times as back then I hadn't learned to control my breathing. Thanks for the review!
this is
pretty good. rhymes seem forced though. i was really digging it, but then i could just hear the hesitation in your voice. you should drink a beer before ya spit next time.. wait are u old enough to buy alcohol? hahaha Wheres the booze at?!!!!
Rhymes are not forced, but I can see where you're coming from, maybe I do need to loosen up my voice and relax as I record. Thanks for the review. :)
Skill killin it!!
DJ, Rapper, Lyricist, Emcee and Scratch Artist! DAMN!! Dropping a solid production like this in 5 hours; thats skill and talent. Props man , real hip hop going down here.
Keep it kickin in the Oldschool portal.
Uhhh, thanks? Wow, this kinda surprised me.. Thanks heaps for it, now you can see where I was coming from with that other song 'Where the boo(ze) at?'.. It's not very lyrically skilled and the beat is weak. But, thanks heaps for the great score and review. :)
Damn!
You getting good JC, get into a proper studio & you'll have it made.
Thanks meeeeen! :D
Good
yeah this is good, the beat can get some work though.
Sweet, thanks for the score man :D Yeah, I've decided that I'm gonna re-record this full proper now, concentrating on the beat more :) too good of a song to let it go to waste on a bad beat :) Cheers!