Hmm, nice!
I don't like rap, neither hip hop.. My favorite style is Rock and Heavy Metal, but, the little I know about hip hop is that this song is one of the bests I've ever heard, it's totally better than the others I'm forced to hear in the radio sometimes, like SCTE3 said. It's really a good song.
The back beat was very cool, your voice was nice too, it has the rap sound, it really fits with the back beat, the lyrics are good, they kept beat rhythm, your voice wasn't slow neither fast, I could understand the lyrics, it's a thing I can't do in those famous hip hop.
As I said before, it's not a bad song, it's better than a lot of other rap, that's why I'm giving you a 9, I think it's a cool song, but I also think there's room to improve. Keep it up, man!
-Member of the Review Request Club-
RogerBK