Uhuh...
Ok, I'm not going to sit here and riticule your belifes like a lot of people have been doing on here. If I wanted to do that I'd PM you.
As for the flash. I found it very boring. No one, unles they are VERY interested, is going to it through all that text. It would help if there was animation, you would find a better audience. There really was nothing very interesting about it. In fact don't jsut add animation, spruce up the whole thing, so it isn't so boring.