Okay, better.
But where do I begin? First of all, Proske is wrong about a few things. There are children, if you count NPCs, and there are both graves, and gravestones. The freezing would have been better if it was, you know, real Ancient Magicks, instead of some nonexistent spell. Oh, and uh, it's always day in RuneScape because there are four suns surrounding Gielinor. So, just a few small flaws.