Fan boys and haters need to simmer down.
I don't write very many reviews, and to be honest I had no intention on making one for this submission. Let me first say that I loath Runescape with all my heart and soul, but I won't draw bias from that fact because there is no point.
Let me start by saying the story was generic, and the animation very unimpressive. I'm a believer in progress, and though your skills are still a bit lacking, you have the right idea for where you are. Just work on it, time and patience will only help your style and art. The thing I liked about the entire movie, was the dialogue. The only real saving grace.
Breath in the work of others here at Newgrounds, ask questions, observe what they do. You don't have to be an amazing artist to create art, you just have to give it style.