slightly comical
The movie was as state in a whole a bit boring. Although I did enjoy the outside indirect references the movie didn't have enough direct humour or interesting content to have much staying power. I look forward to sequel to this promising idea for a toon. I say goo day!
whatshe said...
The first act didnt do much for me but if you add more frames it might look more realistic.
you jerk.
Haha, awesome.
I think this may have been a little too long. I liked it, just not as much as most people did. It was still funny to see that dumb cartoon at the beginning. I thought that guy looked like poop. I didn't know he was a burger. I thought he was poop with the title "Crapfest".
I liked the animation. I'm glad to hear about the backstory. He's just a random alcoholic rabbit. Most of the jokes worked out well. It made sense with the story.
The pacing was as slow as molasses.
Could the pacing of this cartoon be any slower? If your cartoon is dialogue-heavy, you better have some pretty funny drawings to compensate for the lack of movement. The poses they were doing weren't the least bit funny to me and they weren't really specific to any character. I suggest a technique used in cartoons that eventually develops into full fluid cartoon acting. It's called POSE TO POSE. What this method does is where a character does dramatic movements and holds that position, then moves to another position very quickly, best used to potray a "dramatic" scene. It can also be used in a short like this. Careful not to make the poses too wild though, or it will seem like your characters are flailing around. Character acting is very important, so be sure to find things and traits that will distinguish your characters even more.
Hope you're not talking about the Crapfest scene in particular because if you are, I think you missed the point of this short.
As for your "pose to pose" comments... we went to animation school, man. Degrees in this stuff. :)
WOW
man when i seen that it was Shamoozal i thought to my self "Yes this is the same show that did that really good ninja episode". then i hit play just to see you pissing and moaning about a tv show "That is ALOT better and ALOT funnier than this one" im sorry i LOVED your past work but to use your talent to seek revenge on your apparent "dick envy" ... if i had the talent that you have i would keep along the path you where heading down not "hating" on something else to try and get more ppl to like you
but then again its America.
So to recap: Your good But dont waist your talent on "dick envy"