crap builded song like the other reviewers said
BUT!!! this song got very much potentional for a greater song.
Please just completly remake the song and use the melody you have here.
Use trance and the elektronic guitar i hear.
Its really happy, and for that plus 2 points, its really a happymodded song.
but the construction of the song is crap...
but i dont go in on that since the other reviewers told you already.
i really recommend you to remake this song with this melody, and put more effort in it:)
because the awesome melody(wich is the heart of a song) and the happymodded theme in it, you deserve a 7.
im not a 10giver "10000/10 100% OMG awesome" guy.
Please keep me uptodate and PM me or make it to the top 30 and i will listen to it again :)
Borg X.