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Reviews for "Killer Teddy"

~ Review Request Club ~

Killer teddy? To me it doesn't represent a teddy whatsoever, but I guess I can see where it use to look like a child's doll of some sort. I think that it could have looked pretty cool if you added some shredded clothes or some more apparent tears in the teddy.

The biggest problem in my opinion was the consistency of the dark black line that you used to outline the character and the objects in the picture.I would have probably toned down the thickness a little bit and also made sure that there weren't any sloppy parts. For example the top left hand corner of his head sticks out in a very obvious manner as well as the bottom left hand corner of his head. Also the random line by his left arm and the small diagonal line on his neck.

The black scratches and shadows that you used were pretty good. I would have liked to see different line thicknesses in the other parts of your picture like you used for the scratches. The eyes were pretty good as well, but I felt like you could have used a different design for the skull eyes as it gets to be a repetitive representative symbol for eyes.

The three colors used were really good. The goldish dirty color that you used was really effective in this piece. The blue color gave it a nice creepy shade and the black almost seems necessary for the shadows and outlines you would have needed for this.

I wouldn't have minded some sort of background to this. It could be in some kids room since it's a killer teddy and all, but I could also see this being in some sort of mysterious cave. All in all a decent piece.

~ Review Request Club ~

thies responds:

Thanks! Yeah, I actually almost didn't notice those sloppy outlines.. You're right, they should be a bit thinner and less sloppy. Oh and I don't know why I added the random lines, probably forgot to delete them.

Thanks again for the review!