Awe inspiring.
I have every intention of masturbating to this tonight. Well done.
Reviews for "Goth the Elf Episode 1"
Avenger111 responds:
Have fun!
How shameless, I'm reviewing my own show *sigh*
Hello, I would just like to interject a comment if I may about the melancholy state of affairs in this short. The abyss is watching and its shadows swell in a tide of darkness. I would have to agree with previously made comments however, this show has promise (I know this is shameless, but in my long, eternal, and drudging life, I have to find ways to entertain myself).
Not Bad
Hey that wasn't bad at all. When it started i thought it was juts gonna be another goth piss take thing, but the script was really good, and the story line was very humorous. Was a bit short for my taste, but other than that i thought it was a really good flash.
Interestingly Done, Unique and Flashy
I really enjoyed the Style of this piece. The voice acting was really well done, as were the ambient sound effects. The elf needs some work on animation but it might fit the mood of an apathetic to move less frequently like you have shown. The psuedo-anime influence was nice, and not to overboard sell-out. One thing I would deffinatly suggest is more poses for Goth (if thats his name, had a nice ring to it). Side view, 3/4ths (a common angle in movies and flash). Other than that having a longer segment, and including more of the "fluff" thing would be nice(Tumor???). My wife loved that thing. I was more inclined to the elf myself. Anways, nice first submission, and I look foreward to further work.
Liked
That was a pretty good first episode, i like the character design for the main elf character he was pretty creepy looking which suites into the whole style you are going for. I didn't know where you were heading when you introduced the fluffy character but its cool that you have chosen to keep it around as a sort of sidekick. The voice acting was good but what let you down was the transfer which was alittle hard to understand, i think the flash would have benefited from some subtitles. The background you used suited in nicely as well. Overall i was pretty pleased with the flash.
~H-J~