Really good
it is a good start u just need to get better in the graphics, anyways... really cool i shall vote...5
Reviews for "Strider"
hey
not bad... could use some tweaking.
Not bad for a first
The begining is boring, and i didnt think it was going anywhere, because it was just a white screen and a few lines, so maybe touch that up a bit, or shorten it, and it will improve it a bit.
But good job and keep making more flash.
One of the best first flashes I've seen in a while
If not for Fear Hole, this would almost definitely be the best first flash I've ever seen.
it's nice to know someone can turn a song about heroine into a story of two pegasi (?) setting fires and breeding in midair.
the graphics need to be fine tuned a bit, and it should be shorter (end when the song does), but other than that it's pretty good.
irkenempress responds:
:) Thanx! It's reviews like these that motivate me to improve and come back with something better. I will keep practicing and send in another flash soon.
I like...
I like it so much! Keep the good work.