it was ok
and to the guy below me: I know what you mean ive had numerous reviews that have been deleted none of which broke any guidelines.
Reviews for "Oxygen"
notorious responds:
lol if he's the guy you I think he is he left the most abusive review i've ever recieved. If i'm wrong then sorry. But you should also use your review body to write stuff about the animation ;)
glad you gave it an 8.
Hmmm....
Yeah, everybody my last review of this flash was deleted for being abusive. I didn't call any names, there were no personal attacks and I clearly referenced the flash only. Apparently newgrounds is into censorship.
notorious responds:
lol where you the one that reviewed 'gay gay gay sucky sucky sucky'?
Wow, a dark age!
Was that the end of the world? And... where was the oxygen, at least in words? The only doubts I have, but I'm sure I watched a great movie!
notorious responds:
The oxygen is contaminated, and this is the end of a really destructive war. Thanks for the good review!
ummmm...
i thought it was ok but made me go to sleep!!!!!!!!
notorious responds:
yikes!!
hmmmm.....
It was well done, it kept my attention, that's always a plus.. but uhhh... I don't quie get it. What was the complex meaning or deeper message or whatever, if any? Anywho, you did a good job of making the trailer ambiguous if anything, uh.... maybe more dark colors rather than light colors if you want to make it seem foreboding.
Also, when the words appear the accompanying (sp?) animation should happen at the same time, not afterwards, that would help speed things up a little, not that it was slow, but in the trailer there were a lot of 'nothing scenes' where there wasn't anything there but words, and I think since you put the words in the bottom right corner, the putting the animation in behind them would be a nice touch, also it would flow better because it doesn't need to flip back and forth between words and animation all the time.
But enough with the bad stuff, uhmm.. very bleak, nicely done, nice choice in music, it fit very well, and yea, very artistic, I thought it was neat.
notorious responds:
well with the words coming before the animation, i wanted to have them seperate because i wanted one's attention to be either solely focused on the text, or solely focused on the animation. Thanks for the good review and advice!