did you say.... sexy?
lol awesome it is alot better than playing the game can't wait for the final part ^_^
Reviews for "Pico's School The Movie 2"
THATWASAWESOMETHATWASAWESOMETH ATWASAWESOME D:
....THAT WAS AWESOME ):
Man,you're waaaaaaaay better than me at flash animations,and I think I've already told you that like,3/4/dshdskhskj times? xD;
Anyway,that.was.awesome. You've really improved C= This is way better than the first one yepyep.Andwtf,you're right,you do deserve an award for being in the frontpage,yaay. :D
I thought the red dude was a GIRL LOL... And yeah,afro dude looks like shino from Naruto,with the glasses and stuff... xD;
And uh..BLOOD,yeah,blood. Blood is good P:
Awesome animationnnjdshkjfdhkj. :D;;
IM GONNA STALK YOUR NEWGROUNDS ACCOUNT LIKE,RIGHTNOW. ]:
Lalo responds:
LOL, youre totally nuts evelin XD and no, red haired guy is actually a girl, no, actually, a male alien disguised as a gothic girl... or something
thanxx!
man i love these one
I think U outdidureself with these one its better thene pt 1
Sequels are affected by what came before
It's easy to forget this. Your flash skills are amazing, but you've got to balance them with some good storytelling skills.
The first part of this trilogy introduced the characters, and started the action. It needed to be long for all the exposition and such. Once I got through that, however, I was cravin' a long, soothing bloody righteous rampage, or at least some sweet, suspense-crammed action. Instead, I only got as much fighting as was in the first. It worked in the first because the story had gotten me interested; here, no such luck.
I think you'd get better ranking if you waited to release this work until you had the rest of the action that lies between Pico's awakening and his slaying of the red-haired guy. I also think that you could make the action hella more interesting by making each fight longer and giving Pico and his enemies different strategies and ways they attack. So, you've got two options right there - make one flash where Pico just mows down every henchman in his path, or keep making single flashes for each individual fight, and just make the fights really, really cool.
As a rather patient viewer, I advise the second option, because it makes for higher quantities of enormously more awesome flash. Then again, I don't have to make it. (grin)
Later,
Goggleman
Lalo responds:
hey thats a good idea actually, but it would actually be 4 short flashes and people would like to see a bit longer movies from me... and in my opinion there was enough action in there, thanks alot for the review man :)
Quality over Length
Who cares if it was short? it was great!
Lalo responds:
length is kinda important too... i need to balance both