Félicitation!
I was impressed you did all this for a french class. I really liked the story! Now here are a few advices if you ever wanna do some more flash animation.
Be carefull with the sound, the music was allrigth, but the voices were of bad quality so I could'nt hear well. I had to read the subtitles to follow the sotry (even tough I am French Canadian). Also be careful with the labials.
Beside that pratice with your desings will do the rest of it for now. I really liked the camera view you choose along the story and the stick animation was nice too.
You did a great job wich you can be pround of! Keep on animating! I'll be looking foward to it ;D