its ok
its ok but its to short i mean when it happend pico found weed in that locker remember and he had to get the night vision goggles to get the key in the classroom then he had to get a fire extinguisher to put out the fire besides the missing parts its good but yea you should add them and make it longer
Constructive critisism
Nice drawing and the plot is scattered a little i mean Im not trying to be mean but if you do a picos school flash start from when cassandra shoots the class that is a very important detail that you dont want to cut out
wow
that kinda sucked
Not so bad
Its quite good but maybe you would try to open the closet at boys bathroom and kill the student (or whatever) in the closet that shoot poo at pico
That was just an awkward retelling of Pico's School