My say ^^
I really like the animation but i dont know enought about the story to say much about that. I wish they went for longer but at looking at the size already to do what is already there... i would say it would be to much to load.
finally i just want to add, are the two female chars supose to be drow? cause if so...then there the nicest drow i have ever known... except for drizzt ^^. Also the females being the bigger and stronger sex in the drow society they dont seem like it, but this is the aurthours world which he had created and has the right to choose how the story and the char turn out.. i just wanted to throw some drow knowledge in there ^^, any way great stuff!
ps: drow are EVIL!!!!!!