Nice
Still, you need some improvements:
1) Voice acting was terrible. I could barely even hear a single thing.
2) Don't use so much plain tweening! Make something move w/ FBF while he is tweening.
3) Increase the frame rate.
And that's all. I had a couple of laughs, and it was pretty good. I look forward to your future submissisons.
Thanks! :] I really appreciate it.
Yeah, the voice acting for the contestants was pretty bad. Eh.
And I'll try to use FBF a little more. Promise :D And I started that on 12 FPS, when I usually work with 24 -- I was too lazy to change it up.
Thank you for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
decent?
not bad, i guess... the animation was pretty good, but the writing could have used some work. i ended up just staring at the screen feeling like i was supposed to be laughing way too often. take a little more time to work on the script and you'll be great.
and credit dimrain for the song!
The writing could use some work and I did credit Dimrain for the song just now. Thank you for bringing that up. I totally forgot. :]
A fine job in my book
I thought that you did a very good job on this flash exspecially with the graphics. I am more impressed that you have responded to everyone that have reviewed your flash even though some of them are abusive or immature. There are a few things that you could fix like the sound, but if we didn't have anything to improve on then making flash animations wouldn't be as fun.
Thank you. Really. And yes, I try to respond to all the reviews. I feel the need to. So everyone gets a response individually.
Also, of course there has to be flaws in flash and than one day there will be a perfect one just like a Biteywood Cartoon :] Well not perfect, just close to it.
I dunno, made me laugh
The loading screen was kind of annoying, and i guess it's just torture for people with slow computers. I did think this flash was funny but it had unnecessary sound effects and reoccuring jokes, such as the eye blink and the guy saying things were awkward. But I did like the contestants. Actually, I didn't even get that the castle crashers were performing till it was over. I did like the last guy, he was weird.
Ahah Good think you liked it. It was a decent flash atleast.
Nice.
This is one of those submissions that succeeds in getting the whole, "flash submission" out of your head. So many submissions are great, but they aren't very believable, and this submission succeeds in making it believable. Nontheless, it wasn't that bad at all, the graphics were cool and I really liked the whole idea, it was original and it was fun to watch. Good work.