very nice
you have very good music theory.
the melodies you make are ones i only dream of...
it was soothing, and melodic.. and i was entranced UNTILL...
that way too high note within the guitar solo at the end lol...
and very nice kick mastering might i say, the rest might need work.
the appreggio sounds a bit modulated..
overall 5/5 9/10 :D
yea im lowering the guitar an octave its kinda ear piercing XD
Very Very Nice!!!
I love the intro! I like the way it builds up in the middle! Its kinda relaxing too.
Wow
i can't describe how it makes me feel.
Wow!
VERY interesting, I like your mind for melodies, it's quite awesome what you did in this song. I don't think I could make anything like this one. :D Very soft and slow paced but also interesting.
Though however, little bit of constructive criticism. The elements you used in the song made it very nice to listen to and soothing, but the use of FL Slayer didn't quite do it for me. A lot of it went high pitched so I was moreso focusing on the sound of the guitar rather than the song itself. Don't get me wrong though, your use of the guitar was pretty good, very nice melody you came up with for it. However in this case, it didn't quite suit it.
Though Nice job on the song, it's quite unique. Very nice work. :)
- Zerest
I was debating on lowering it an octave but its quite overpowering.
beautiful intro.
Lovely use of piano, Great strumming, The song kinda transitions to the techno part pretty well. At 1:36 i'd of added a little more to the transition to give it a little more spark. The bass comes in and assists with that for sure.Then you bring in the pan flute wich works well. I'd still say its missing something though. All in all though its got a beautiful sound to it and is a fun listen! So keep it up and good work!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks :P and what do you think its missing?