I understand you want to make a difference
But you shouldn't submit this on newgrounds. Try youtube, the reason why is because if you want many people to see this it isn't going to happen. People come to newgrounds to get there daily dose of violence, porn and other things. There are only a couple hundred people on newgrounds that know when to stop the violence but the rest they just well... you get it right? other that that really good and touching glad you submitted it
Thank You
Its nice to see someone take a normal approach to this tribute, others i have seen are just full of swearing and cursing. This was really beautiful, and like the guy below said, im voting 5 with my heart.
5/5
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Protected with my heart...
...rather than my head. Its a nice sentiment etc. but there are a number of these already and there will be more. Its not of very great quality and needs tidying up:
The music needs to start soomer and more smoothly, then it needs to end more smoothly. If you go into Properties and click on the instance of sound the music is in you can make it fade in and out.
It is always difficult to decide how long to give people to read text and I am sure you have not left enough time for people to read the longer texts. You probably need to give people Next buttons for text sections as long as those.
We are tolerant of slide shows at times like these but really NG is not the place for slideshows ordinarily.
Best Wishes to all who are saddened and feel loss at this time from the Dragons & Spirits of London.
IceDragon64
I really do appreciate your review, I don’t really know much about flash, but I am trying at least. I just decided to make a slideshow because I really don’t have the exact concept of what I wanted to do, I just knew I had to make a real tribute instead of all these fake ones running around. Thank you again!
Whoa Goodness...
It has a sad feel to it, but not the *right* feel, you know? It ends too abruptly, the graphics aren't great, but you could still work at it.
Yes, I felt I was going somewhere with it but I didn’t know exactly how to end it, probably why it ended the way it did. Thank you for the review!
Don't listen to that last guy
Yeah, so it's true that this isn't a true flash animation. But whatever, the idea behind it is genuine. It was a tragic event and people should be moved by it, even though our generation seems a bit more detached than what we probably should be. As far as your religous beliefs go, I say more power to you. I, myself, think organized religion is just a way for people in power to control those below them, but if it helps people than I can't really bash it. Overall, if you want to be a better flash artist than work on it, but as for this submission your heart's in the right place, and others should know that people's lives were greatly effected by this tragedy and it shouldn't be just another news story.
I really do thank you for the support and I do find your kind words grateful. I am working on a project right now but I just don’t understand a lot of the basics of flash to really get it going, and I’m a little tight on cash right now to take classes. Anyways, I’m glad you showed me support! I really don’t care about a score, just one good enough to stick around and show people really do care!