's nice!
Nice animation! I don't know how, but you're one of the lesser who actually make this sound scary at the end. Or it's just me, since I just woke up in the (really early) morning. Anyway it scared me!
Heh, after reading your "journal.swf" - since it's actually a journal (again) - I must say you done a good job. There are many sites who do as jerky as you spoke about sheezyart. I'm not sure if you're speaking the truth here, but I got no reason to believe you, so at the moment I will. I'll "investigate" that site myself one day aswell. Not much people have the chance to yell their message out, but I hope for you this submission even gets frontpage, since it's a really good short, and if it's true, it deserves to be heard.
Now off to the quality. Really nice animations/graphics. I love your style. It's really good to understand, though you should've put in subtitles. Can't you do that later, as an "update"? I - and many people more on this site - ain't English/American, thus have trouble understanding this movie. Nice quality sound aswell, and I can find some humor in it.
Good job!