Hey, you gotta love them...
Those great folks who are willing to give some other people their time to help them become more. And trust me, this is awesome. Love the instrumentation and mixing. I can hear Jesse's influence, but I can still tell it's you.
Loving the fade into Solemn's Reach. Like the variations that have been added, especially that high counterpoint.
Heck, forget specifics. It's all good here. You've got a nice driving bass that's not overload, great mixing. Wait, am I rambling now? Darn it... XD
Keep up the awesome work. All the best,
~Sir_Furious