Excellent!
Damn, this is the first VG flash that I've been able to sit through in a while. It had everything, a cool story, good animation, good sprite editing, and excellent length for the size. Keep it up man, you'll only get better. Now I'll have to check out your other movies. Like the other reviews, I have no idea why this has such a low rating. The only thing i could say to improve is your spelling, use a dictionary, it will really add to your movie!
-Randy Solem VGDC