Reviews for Dockatar: The random guy

[Abs55]

Nice parody!

I like how you used the avatar for this animation, it was quite good good and funny. The 3d map bit was really good and the graphics were quite good. The only problem was the sound, it was quite hard to understand it.

Subtitles may have helped but as you said before it could take up room. Why not just put words on screen without using a black bar so the word appear on the screen and you can change the text colour to suit the background? Also, if the speech was a bit more slow, it might be easier to understand.

Overall, nice animation, get the sound right and it'll be good.

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IZSBHR responds:

OK, thanks (:

[timesplitterkiller]

huh

It looked good but I have no idea what's going on

[Coop]

A little fast

This is a well done flash, though I think there are certainly areas where you can improve.

Yes, you could add subtitles - a small balck bar across the bottom of the screen and a regular white font doesn't take much, trust me.

Other than that, maybe you could slow the pace of the speech down, so that we can comprehend what is actually being said.

Still, you've done a great job on the graphics, so please take my comments on board and make the next installment in the series better for it.

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IZSBHR responds:

Thanks :)

- Subtitles... hmm...
- The speech is to fast?
- Thanks again :)

[SweenDogDude]

I agree with the subtitles

It was hard to understand and not knowing wtf was going on, other then it was avatar, sorta took a hack at the comedy. Woulda been funnier if I knew the puns being played... by hearing them. Yuh know.

IZSBHR responds:

I understand, but I wasn't satisfied with cramming everything on stage in the first place, and subtitles mean it's harder to see. (:

[Bezman]

Some promising elements in here. Overall though, I

I really liked the icons you had on the play-screen. Brilliantly simplified, great colours, hinting wonderfully to the forthcoming event.

I wasn't too keen on the actual movie. The narration was hard to understand for the most part and the big dude and backgrounds looked rather messy.

The shot with the map was decent though.

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Some promising elements in here. Overall though, I didn't enjoy it.

IZSBHR responds:

Thank you (: