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Reviews for "the boy..."Magpie""

Stupid

It is stupid and the animation is bad.

Major Flaw.

Animation was inconsistent with the story. for instance razor blades UNDER his eyes. It was clearly OVER his eyes in the story.

It simply sucked.

I dont hate it because its dark poetry or "I just dont understand"
I dont like it because it was crap. animation was crap, the voice was crap. The story line was crap.

It WAS crap.

It was short and had a poor drawing style, along with the fact that I lost all sound halfway through...
I think you might have been going for some Dr. Seuss style writing, but it was too dark and I didn't feel it.

bad

u need to improve this piece of work