Great job, man
One thing kept bugging me through god's conversations with Adam... god kept refering to himself as "Thy"... "Thy" means "your" - as in "belonging to you".
I agree that, if the story is taken literally, a problem does arise when Adam and Eve are kicked out of the Garden of Eden only to find a number of tribes in the surrounding. Which brings up this question :
Are you planning on doing both creation stories?
For those that haven't had the chance to actually read the bible, it contains 2 creation stories.
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for you - usually, when more than one account of a story appears in the bible, and they usually contradict each other to a point, it's generally percieved as an allegory and not meant literally.
Another example of such a practice is the story of how David met the first king of Israel (Saul). In the first story, Saul hears of the David's talent at playing the harp and invites David to his court to play for him (Saul was somewhat manic and had fits of depression. David's playing would sooth him). In the second story, David is represented as a young boy come to bring his brothers supplies as they fight the philistines (and then kills Goliath in battle). So basically, the creation story was never meant to be taken literally.
(I also think it might be interesting to note that later, once David is already king, there is a line that claims the man who killed Goliath was a man named Elhanan - some people claim it's an alias of David's but most agree that if there really was a Goliath, then this is probably the man who killed him)
Well, hope to see more good work from you.