Reviews for 1 - The Story of Khale

[god-dan]

two words.

there they are ^.
Now, onto my first review ever. And what a great flash it is to review.
You have a great artistic mind; the concepts, the tones, compositions, everything, superb.
I love this kind on non-stop animation and getting the fluidity and smoothness of the animation is tricky. [I've tried the same thing with 2 submissions.] It's a lot of fun to do.
Also, this is more a rant about some of the reviews you've gotten...A lot of people are complaining about the lack of voice and in-your-face plot, when we all know it doesn't actually need one to be a great animation.
Excellent work. You really deserved front page for that.

-ps. I got a lot of 'ZOMG!!1! U LIEK TOTALLEE COPYED BRAKENWOOOD'S STYLE 'stuff too. As flattering as it is...it's annoying.

So yeah, excellent frame-by-frame, AND coloured outlines too. Must've taken you some time.

Keep it up and I think everyone is looking forward to your next piece of work.

G.O.D Dan

LeafWorthy responds:

Thanks a lot man. Thanks for noticing the colored outlines too. Damn, that's much harder than it looks.

[Jimbob130495]

Pretty darn good!

Great flash there LW

Didn't really get the most part of it :/
But anyhow, an amazing flash so i gave it a 10 :D

Next one tho, maybe have some talking ;)

[AdzL33t]

Plenty of Khale, not enough story

Its very visually stunning, but I was sort of become bored, but I'm still very interest in futher stories. I guess this is ok for a begging of a movie, but I still want a story rather then visuals. Still I cant wait ofr the rest. Do you think you can convert for a file in youtube, or even connnect the rest later on

[Lockloria]

hmm

i like this its very well done i cant wait to see what else you can do

[ESKentertainment]

hmm...

After watching your first animation, I'm glad to see how much you have improved.

42 episodes huh? I wish you luck and it will be interesting to see the plot unfold (at least I hope). At any rate, your animation is very good. It's one thing to draw well, but it takes some talent to get it to run smoothly.

I didn't really see any areas you needed to improve on, maybe someone else will :)