Drums
They're often overlooked when it comes to NewGrounds yet they can be brilliantly placed if they're given the right amount of attention.
Unfortunately, I feel that you've given them too much attention and the beat that you've chosen to use is very glitchy. Now admittedly this worked very well at 0:51 but once the drop happened it felt very out of place, with the drum syncopation at the end of every 4 bars. It's a good idea but I think this track would sound better and more full if you'd stuck to the general drum & bass drum line.
Apart from that, this is an excellent track! Loving the gritty feel you've given it and very much like the 8-bit synths you've used through-out. I have to say that I do agree with you on that synth sounding as though it's whispering.
I've never listened to any of yoru stuff before so I'm not sure how dark this is but I'll give them an ear after this!
Have fun;
J3en.