Kind of long but has a great build-up
A really nice tune you have here, it seems very well done and well orginized, everything seems to flow right perfectly into eacg following note wich was pretty awsome i thought, This one was really long though, maybe abit too long so maybe possibly you can cut the size and how long it spreads out, Now i like the variaty in this and with the "BUILD-UP" it was pretty good i thought. you really show effort in that portion from the silence to the build up, so even though it was kinda long you still gave it some good meaning, anyways nice work.
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Maybe think about it cutting the size abit as it seemed abit on the longside of tunes, besides that it was pretty good.