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Reviews for "The Paradox Trials (1.2)"

Pretty Bad

A fairly simple concept which you've somehow managed to mess up.

The Loader was fine and the flash mouse made me think I might have something worthwhile in front of me but when it finally loaded I was dissappointed.

1 - The Graphics were hideous in game. All nasty greens and scribbles. I don't know what kind of effect you would hope to achieve using such a confused style but for me it just looked badly designed.

2 - You got question 1 wrong. Lol.

Freeze is the opposite of burn while plastic and silverware are just different types of a product. I'm think you confused yourself as to the meaning of an oxymoron.

3 - The Help Menu was a bit sketchy. Didn't really give any clarification on what you expected the player to do.

4 - I think you also misunderstood the concept of a paradox. As the player is expected press paradox to continue even though the question isn't a paradox.

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In conclusion, some potential. Your basic flash knowledge is there but there's no style or evidence of planning. Next time give your game a few test plays. Show a few friends, get some feedback, redesign and then post to the portal.

SAGER89 responds:

umm... dude.. Freezer burn is the only real word in the multiple choice.. CHECK WIKIPEDIA FOR GODS SAKE !!! Freezer burn is a condition that occurs when frozen food has been damaged by ice crystals, due to air reaching the food. It is generally induced by substandard (non-airtight) packaging.

<ok> i supose

could be better