Oooh
Slightly interesting.
Personally, the voices could be clearer, but I enjoyed the character designs.
Interesting start.
Reviews for "Minushi - Chapter 1"
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Neat!
Beatiful Flash-work, but this is another example of VERY impressive skill in animation, yet needing some work art-wise. The buildings were great, and the design of machinery was great, but I think the characters could have been more dynamic visually. Good acting, good animation, and good music, just work on art!
Here we go again...
I feel another series comin' on that I'm gonna get hooked on....... For sure you have me willing to see where it goes ^_^
Good, better than most.
Graphics - Well done. Especially the 3D effect you got with the layers. Very nicely done.
Style - It chokes of pulp anime. All things considered, though, you still have time to set yourself apart from the rest.
Sound - Very nicely done! I would mail you my left arm to get the source of those mechanical sounds( (jk).
Violence - Gargantuan robots that kill stuff. Need I say more?
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Story - First of all; you have committed an evil in story telling. The robots can be seen to have no purpose other than to kill stuff, which works for a short while, but they are much easier to identify with when they have a motive.
Second - your hook is good (the guy with the robot) so long as you explain it in very short order. He cannot remain nameless and identitiless forever. Even if the main character knows nothing at least tell the audience something about him. Maybe he's looking at a picture or something, maybe we see a scar. Something to let the audience know a thing or two so this guy is no longer wholly a mystery (some mystery is ok).
Right, I'm rambling.
Good job on the whole. If you execute the rest well it should turn out to be an enjoyable series which has been lacking lately.