You got potential.
Graphics where good in general, the style and the story where nice. Not too violent and it did make me laugh :)
Your stonger point is that the movement of your caracter where very fluid and we could feel the movement well because of that.
Your weak point is the sound wich was low quality. We couldn't hear the voice well... (but it didn't really bug me that much since the action was worth looking at som much).
I hope to see much more from you in the near future. I think you really got potential there.
Keep going on!