The Good Plot, The Bad Script, and The Ugly People
The story has the potential of being good, and the graphics were okay, and the voice acting was alright. I just wish the voice actors had better stuff to say... or something to talk about. As it is, your script is nowhere near as good as the plot itself. You just need to get better jokes in there and find better ways to make fun of society. It has potential in the sequel, though.
Also, the whole "drunk" concept could have been so much funnier. Check out some of Douglass Adams' book, "The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy." There are some awsome drunk people in there.