No offense, but i hated this
Not stylish, not great. Bad shadow work. Not at all creepy. Needs more darkness and shadows and red.
Reviews for "Salesman"
well..
I think its a way to happy to be violent.. if you use more dark colors it will be more creepy in a kind of no sense movie, like your damn good Job Coffe brak, i juzt.. love it.. its a perfect example of a twisted Mind.!!and so i like freaky shiit... I love coffe break.. and this was.. O.k.. so i hope you take my tips and add more Dark colors to your films and some gary cloud would help =)
suggestion
I sensed a bit of inspiration from John Wayne Gacy (A.K.A. Pogo). Seeing as you've used Music by Acid Bath in another submission and seeing that they also have a fascination with pogo, I was wondering if you might aswell? Well, if you do I think making a flash about him would be quite successful... just a suggestion. great flash though.
that is weird
this guy is like a freak or something... thats scary im for reals yup yup....
VV what he said....not bad...not good....just average