This looks good, but beware...
I personally like what you are trying to do and I think that it is great that you actually have Alvin's backing. In return though, you now have to live up to high expectations. Some that might not be your goal in the first place. This happened with the original DBZ and DBGT. The guy who did GT tried to go on a good thing, but added elements that made the fans mad. Thus GT was declared a failure before it had a chance. But don't worry, in the long run you'll be just fine... as long as your series is good! Good luck! and may the power of good reviews be with you. (okay that was lame... so sue me...)