only the atheists can save us now!
I totally expected it and it still made me jump. Even before that I was already on the edge of my seat. This is awesome work man and I can't wait to see the next episode. And that song was hilarious!
also the cop sounds like Edwyn Tiong, the voice of Legend from Xin.
Abso-fucking-lutely Amazing
You're a genius, man. A straight up genius. I seriously doubt you could improve it.
Waiting excitedly for the sequel.
Wow..........
As a practicing Catholic I must say I am very offended.....
HA! I bet I got you! Good work, though!! I enjoyed it very much. Just one question. What happeded during the end credits? But I digress, I congratulate you on a job well-fucking-done!!!
OH lord.
Can only imagine how many "hardcore" christians this is going to piss off..
Anyway extremley decent flash, one of the best on newgrounds in my opinion. Dark and funny at certain points, I couldn't help but laugh when the guy cut his wifes head off.
I did jump a little bit during the sleep scene...I'll admit that..
Ignore all the jackasses who have no flash movies submitted and are trying to give you tips on something they have no experience about.
glad you dug it
Great illustrations.
I can tell you put a lot of time into this, and you certainly have a lot of skill with storytelling, visuals, and blocking.
Personally, I think the pacing could be quicker, especially in the first half. I didn't feel any connection to the characters, and no interest in what happens to them. I also felt the choice of dialogue was much too wordy and not-believable, and the voice acting severely limited the intended impact of the piece.
Aside from this, there were a few tasty animation sequences, and the illustrations and layouts worked nicely. Focusing on scriptwriting and finding voice talent will kick your future work up quite a few notches, because you've got a lot of other strengths.
And don't listen to the mouth-breather that told you not to use motion tweens. Making them feel natural just takes work, and you're definitely on track. Keep up the good work!