lol
although the layout was noobish, you compensated incredibly with the storyline and time progression. you captured it perfectly. good work :)
Reviews for "12 (SMB)"
Thisismyhobby1 responds:
Thank you, ill make a better layout next time
I liked it.
This cartoon was the shit! I'm guessing it was your first one since it had a lot of major flaws but I gave you a 5/5 because to me it looks like you put some serious effort into this. I've never seen a rip off of 24 before (nor have I watched it) but this is the only cartoon of its kind! The sprites were done pretty well for what I'm assuming is a beginner (correct me if I'm wrong). But as for your drawing, it was anything but top of the line. Newgrounds has some GREAT tutorials on drawing though and I think if you invested an hour or two into that and used your original type ideas like this you could make one kick ass flash!
it was great.
that was great, i liked how you changed scenes withe side scrolls, and stuff, glad i helped... sort of, i wanna see wut happens next.
5/5
Thisismyhobby1 responds:
Yay thank you
i really liked it, but...
the spelling and text were not so great...
very nice
but please, make the words easier to read
and learn how to spell. =D
Thisismyhobby1 responds:
i tried to find the best text color, i'll try harder