Reviews for Jazzman - Yet Another WIP

[devopablo]

Missed the mark, but not by much.

I think you know I'm a fan of your music, so take this review in stride.

I like the separation in moods between the DnB and dubstep sections, but I think you should try giving these 2 things a shot to see if you like the sound better:

1) Have the tempo deceleration (I don't remember the musical term atm) happen such that the pause at 1:38 is the "true drop" that separates the sections.

2)175bpm --> 130bpm (I think I'm pretty close on those) is kind of jarring. I assume you plan on making the lead-in to the dubstep a bit more meaningful, but it might help if the DnB section was faster and instead of just getting significantly slower, it dropped down to (or at least almost down to) exactly half-time for slower but harder-hitting dubstep.

I like the instrumentation, and I really like the initial DnB flavor. It sounds like you just need to nail the transition. You're developing a really solid style for your wobble as well, and it sounds great. I look forward to hearing this song again when it's finished.

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mr-jazzman responds:

Thanks for the ideas man, I might try this approach in future projects. Unfortunately, this is just a sketch, which is pretty much all that's gonna get put up here from now on, since my main focus right now is on gathering the resources for my album (both manpower and equipment). Good stuff to keep in mind though! =D Thank you too for being a loyal fan to my music and providing me honest feedback; you're one of the few that I won't forget devopablo!