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Graphics: 8 - Ill give you credit on this because the graphics were rather smooth, but at the same time there wasnt much to well.. see or look at. When the Irobot makeshift was in the factory there should have been.. well, a factory look to it, not just a long hall and then him falling into a pit.
Style: 6 - Fictional and a flash short, two things that are common but i just cant really give much points here because being original is harder then it seems, your off to a good start though.
Sound: 8 - Good choice of sound, i would have gave a ten if there had have been factory noises IE grinding and or wielding effects when he was being put together.
Violence: 0 - If this was made to be funny i certainly did not pick up on it, im not counting this.
Interactivity: 1 - Wooot a play button oh noes! Im not counting this, its not a game.
Humor: 0 - Like the violence, i dont think you entended this to be funny nor violent so im not going to count this.
Overall: 7 - It was good, especially for a start, i mean there was only three things i could really judge on here, but none the less ive done that before.
Ok, you wanted some Constructive Criticism, well here it is. For graphics and really any sort of graphics in a flash movie, more is always better, smoothness does count yes, personal art work, anything to give it that extra touch. In your case the whole "Factory" looked like a tunnel shaft, i mean you could have had say a Production Line, with others being assembled, and just out of the blue, this robot escapes. Just follow what the people say and what they want, and people always want more, more everything, doesnt matter even if you give them more then enough, they always just want more. So yeah, none the less, keep it up.
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