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Reviews for "TLOZ Marihuana`s Mask"

Poorly done.

This piece of work may have some potential, but it isn't very good.

Good side: The music was great! It fit perfectly since it was from the scene. Also the clock had the real time, which was pretty cool, I have to admit.

Bad side: The jokes were not funny at all. You made them say stupid things like "I gots to pay 4 da mask da traffiker stole!" That is completely irrelevant to the storyline, and not funny. When making a parody, the point is to exaggerate and warp fact to make it funny. Or make what could go wrong go wrong. Simply making everybody random isn't funny.
The whole thing was in jive, too. While some is okay, you overdid it. The spelling and the jive was awful, and that's not how the Legend of Zelda characters would speak. Plus some of the spelling is plain chat talk, with U, 4, 2, Y, and words were misspelled. It's not Marihuana. It's Marijuana.
The graphics were not that well done. Some crappy graphics have a certain charm but yours didn't. Charming crappy graphics usually have a type look or something that looks funny that couldn't be done without a bad graphic, but yours took no advantage of that.
You may have some potential, but play the game one more time, write down everything beforehand, get a spell checker, and EDIT. Editing is hard but it is crucial for good writing.
-Ranger2

Newbies have an excuse to suck

While you said you were new at this, you should try and use a better flash program and think of better material-this flash was very poorly made.

Hmm

Apparently you are Sarken. It took me a while to figure that out though.

your spelling sucks

.......work on it...

....what?

uhhh.....was this intended to be humorous?