Great animation, little plot
There wasn't really a story or anything but as a showcase for you animation skills it was brillliant. This movie contains some of the best animation I've seen for a long time on the portal. So yeah, if you can put in more story and humour into your next submission I think it'd do really well. The music fits well too.
Not bad but not briliant
The animation was good and I liked the choce of music but the ending seemed pretty abrupt and it wasnt as funny as it couldve been. but it was a decent flash
to cool!
^_^ definetly great use of flash!
was funny and i think that it could be enjoyed by all ages
keep up the great work i hope to be seeing some more great stuff from you soon!
OMG!!!
yoshi is cool as! i love yoshi! and you executed this flash so well! good work and keep making yoshi films lol.
Was this amateur work?
If this is only your second flash, I say BRAVO! Hardly ever see newbies do so well so quickly.
Only CC' I can give you is the obvious stuff...
- Animation detail can be better. Animation looks great as is, but adding more detail would make it even better.
- Storyline\Idea can be more thought-out. It's a cute little animation and it does have a basic idea but its also a small idea.