A bit to overated.
In fact, you kind of tried to execute the graphics like waterman, but your not even close to what comedy he does. Its such overdone comedy, its as if it is just straining for a laugh button. Next time, make your humor cutting, and not overdone.
good work..
its a good start
Good start
This clip is okay but I wonder if it's even good enough to be considered okay well anyways it has alot of laughs and things but one of the things that need work on is the clip on how much action needs to be put on.
I couldn't even...
..watch the whole thing it was so boring. Come up with new jokes next time..