Not Bad
Not bad for a spare time thing. I thought it was pretty funny especially the planes in the background and the words "TEH EDN". Looking forward to whatever flash the voice actors are getting their lines for.
Reviews for "Chillin With Wolverine"
Red-Wolf responds:
thanks... some of the other reviewers don't seem to get the concept of "spare time" flashes...
Lol
That was really funny. I thought "Eat at Joe's" was the normal anoying plane untill the second plane came in... It was funny
Needs a lot of work
It actually wasn't that bad. The animations were decent enough, but I have a feeling (due to lack of movement) that you haven't quite mastered tweening yet (am I right?). I would keep working on that flash, and actually finish it, because the title of this flash is actually really misleading. Essentially the flash is about planes getting into a fight. Spider-Man never actually confronts Wolverine, and you never actually get to see Wolverine either. Scrap the ending on this thing and finish it up, I'm sure it would be pretty decent.
Red-Wolf responds:
actually Im really good at tweening... I just didnt put much into this flash seeing as it was just something to pass the time while I wait for voice actors to get their lines in for the flash im currently working on.
its...ok
This flash despite what others may say, its ok, but need plenty of work.
It was very sort compared to others and the scene didnt change very much, in fact the only things that moved were the plains and spider man in the end.
But your humor and story lines are on the right track in my opinion, i mean you flash didnt give me a headache..
Needs work...
Yeah, first of all the art had a lot to be desired. The way spider man was drawn made him look really terrible. You need to learn to use tolls that bring the quality of the outlines up. Converting them to shapes is always useful.
Wolverine looked pretty poor also, the claws were just grey lines, and there was nothing special about that.
The planes in the background were a good touch, and possibly the only humorous thing in the entire flash.
As for the voices, you really need to work on them. Wolverine's voice lacked any emotion and didn't stay true to his character. It seemed too monotonous and he complained a lot.
Also, look into drawing your own logos and things like that, the Trace Bitmap job on the 'The amazing Spider Man' logo stood out like a sore thumb.
There's a lot of potential in there though, keep it up.