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Elaborate on the plot. Make it much longer. Way shorter than your other Sherbert flashes. Also add some violence. hardly any violence.
Pretty bad considering your skill with flash. I didn't know what was going on.
3/5
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As i said before this is short because i split the 3rd sherbert into 2 parts. And if it makes you happy there'll ve violence in the 2nd part. Sorry to disapoint you.
Thanks for the review.
Getting better
The animation is a little slow and jerky still, but I'd say you are making progress. I'd have suggested that you actually use speakonia for the phone voice, since Sherbert thought it sounded like StrawberryClock.
The main problem the animation has is that it's far too short. You could probably fit the rest of the plotline into the alloted space for the episode, so why not try?
Anyway, those few small niggles aside, I think this is a decent flash. Your skills are improving, although I do not like the flatness that some of the pictures give off and moving Sherbert's legs / paws looks a little lame. Keep up the work, I look forward to 3-2
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Thanks for the review! The reason it's so short is because of the music, it takes FOREVER to load. maybe it's just my computer though. I didn't use speakonia because I didn't want to download anything, that I'd only use once. And if i did i'd get into the habit of using it, 'cause i can't stand animation's with that.
Once again thanks for the review. I'll try to work on sherbert's walking feet cause it slightly annoys me to.
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haha. it was very funny when the box falls in sherbert.haha.thx for submitting my techno in the movie :) i really enjoy the movie.hope to see the next part :):):)
c you soon and have a nice score
ROBO-RIDDICK
Thanks for the review, and music. :)
Next part will hopefully be out soon.
Great!
Just ignore the last reviewer he's a dick. It's awsome. You should work a bit on the graphics but besides that it's great! ( I like the
part where stawberryclock is owned )
Thank you for uploading this.
Thanks for the review. I'm guessing the last review was abusive and was kicked off. Glad you like it.
haha death to Strawberry clock.
your package will be arriving.......NOW, hahaha
thanks for the review glad you like it!