You haven't got it right sorry.
Once again, Flips my friend, are NOT Parkour, please don't get the two confused!
Reviews for "Parkour/ Free Running"
It was kinda cool.
But you can just can find videos of people doung parkour all over the internet. So I wasn't blown away or anything. It looked like you just ytaced over actual video clips, not bad but for an animation the movements almost seemed too... realistic. I'm not sure if that's the best way to describe it but hopefully you've gotten what I'm trying to convey.
Perhaps rather than tracing you just used a video to get concepts and some specifics for drawings of your own.
Speaking of drawings, even though they were traced they could have been a lot better. They needed to be more refined, cleaner.
But none the less it was pretty cool, good luck on your next submission :)
blueham responds:
thanks for your advice :) i'm now working on my drawing skills on flash so i can make a new parkour flash with my own graphics XD
Not Bad
A bit short, clean up your traces a bit as well so they look more human
not bad
It was an o.k movie. To say that you traced footaged it wasnt to bad a job. Do your own drawings next time, it normally works out better. Ya need to have bigger jumps and more flow aswell.
blueham responds:
yer thanks well me and my friends filmed it over 9months ago and now my editing skills(for the movie) aswell our parkour/free running skills and flow and stuffs =)
Hmmm
Nice graphics! Could have been a little more. I dunno.