Holy cow.
I love the intro melody, seriously.
But things started to get iffy around the 0:22 mark, I love the synths you have going, but I'm not a mass fan of the kick you have going, maybe its the speakers I have, but it just lacks bass, theres too many fluffy high frequencies going, so it needs more bass.
Eeh, at 0:45, not liking this new synth, way to high for my tastes, but still, the
other stuff, despite so much playing, goes pretty nicely.
I think you could've played the ending out a bit better, the massive clash of instruments is a bit, weird in my opinion.
But still, good job! You get an 8/10 due to the fact that you lack bass.
Cheers.
-MeD