Wow.
I looked at the winners on the front page, and briefly glanced at Ida's Luck, part two, and decided I wanted to see the first, to judge if I'd be interested in the second.
This is amazing, and like anotehr person put it excellently below, that this is innocently creepy, well written and just... fascinatingly dark. Keep it up. I'm going to the next part. Expect another glowing review. :]