T'was alright
Good start, the graphics were good and the spound was crisp. However in the end it is just another video game movie, and there are plenty of them on newgrounds, to say the least. also, ive seen that ad as well. But a good job regardless.
thanks
not bad
That was ok but it would have been better if u didnt have mad world playing and instead had gunshots and stuff
k ty
Needs Work
I gonna be cruel but only cuz if this is what hard work gets you then you really need to either put in a lot more time or give it up completely, you need to get some inspiration alright i'll give you that you cant really take gears of war any further than it already goes but check out something from the other additions to the site and use it in your own way, also your attention to detail could do with a bit of work like the cog uniform you designed was terrible grab the case and try and make it as similar as you can to the one on it. that is all
thankyou u are right i am good at flash i just dont put in the effort :(
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I didnt think It would make me laugh but it kinda did... Why did the locust look like a hairy, grey old man??
It was good
it was good, it wasn't great - the animation could be improved and it could be longer but apart from that it was a good short.