Characters....
They way the characters and monsters look is pretty bad, try to improve on that.
Reviews for "gears of war"
well done
great animation scheme you have there, as well as making it seem like every day is the same low-life gut-spilling war in there. good job, comrade.
onion-breath123 responds:
thaks
Needs Work
I gonna be cruel but only cuz if this is what hard work gets you then you really need to either put in a lot more time or give it up completely, you need to get some inspiration alright i'll give you that you cant really take gears of war any further than it already goes but check out something from the other additions to the site and use it in your own way, also your attention to detail could do with a bit of work like the cog uniform you designed was terrible grab the case and try and make it as similar as you can to the one on it. that is all
onion-breath123 responds:
thankyou u are right i am good at flash i just dont put in the effort :(
sucks ass
man he runs for like 3/4 of the clip.
onion-breath123 responds:
plz leave constructive critisizem tht was hurtful :(
Hmm
It was a fair enough idea, you just didnt pull it off atall
onion-breath123 responds:
constuctive critisizem plz